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ZeldaFreak701
Battle Toads.....

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Dallas/Fort Worth, TX

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Good writing, I loved it!

Unless I'm mistaken, you don't have a hat on in that picture.

or you could have meant it figuratively.

Whatever.

I wanna comment from you...

In all honesty, the writing itself was good, I liked it, possibly could've toned down the description of every event happening, but still it was a nice piece.
Only queries were that the characters of Link and Zelda didn't seem like Link and Zelda. To be honest throughout the games I've never seen Link interested at all in Zelda, plus the idea of him speaking so forward and openly like that made the character seem different.
I'll stop being a nerd now, it was a good fanfic.

Nicely done, always loved Link and Zelda..but you did over did it with the description. Bah, anyways it was good! And I got DA to...lol

Nice story.